not bad at all
the 3D model was great.
but the animation was not.
3D animation is tough I now and since Im not so good at it either (not yet I hope) I'll give you the advice my school gave me over and again.
let someone walk, jump and move for you and use that as an example it will help to make the animation look more natural.
btw witch program do you use?
good luck with your future work!
bad animation and graphics
but that was suposed to be so, good excuse now I don't have to work on my crappy drawings and can submit all my school work here.
but aside from the graphics and animation:
bad voice acting all the people spoke with the same voice and didn't have any emotion.
and the meaning of this was to put a smile on my face.
there is a smile there alright but thats because my day is great.
after seeing this I would rather cry.
work longer and harder on your next flash.
maybe animate the characters in your movie?
good luck in the future.
your animation wasn't smooth.
It was jumpingh all the time wich is anoying to look at and you should learn a litle action script so you can click to the next part of the text.
Im a fast reader and was waiting for the next part to pop up but a slow reader might not be able to read it in time.
but it informed pretty well.
so go practice some more and your next flash might be a lot better.
good luck with your future work.
Im learning actionscript myself now and what you made here is something that someone like me can make with about 3 months of actionscript experience.
but simplicity does not have to be a problem for a game (look at pong it is still popular) but with a few changes this game can be much more fun.
so here is some advice:
1) the block you used as a character is a huge mistake. it looks retarded and the changing of the sqaure was anoying and distracting. next time use a normal square or a real character.
2) the game had only the black walls and the red triangles to make you die.
you could make lots of stuff that makes the game more interesting like floor that turns into a wall after you pass it (Im not gonna explain it in detail but basicly you have to make the floor detect when the player is on and as soon as the player no longer interacts with the floor make a child (of a regular wall) at the location of the floor and after that destroy the floor (remove child).
3) try to make a ending to a game instead of trying to anoy the player when he reaches the last level.
4) practice a lot
5) ask someone with more programming experience to look at your work before posting it. he or she might help you to point out some stuff that doenst feel good and might give you the propper code solution
good luck with future games and keep it up.
wow that needs work
you made a lot of misstakes that were quit uh... stupid.
first: when some one scores the ball just spawns randomly in the direction of the one scored against, no problem with that, but it goes to wide sometimes it goes to the uper limit or the lower limit. never do that because if your at the upper limit and it goes down you can't make it.
second: the point is given to early you should wait untill it is out of the field because sometime you still can hit it but the ball is destroyed and the other gets a point.
third: what the *bleep* the ball gets stuck for a while in my bat.
these and many more are the errors you have made.
work harder and more and ask others for advice and above all KEEP PRACTISING.
action script is hard (I know Im still practicing it) and this is nice affort but not worthy to post yet.
good luck in the future.
btw: most flash games are made in a single frame (games like pong don't need more) unless it has differnt levels those are made with a frame for each level.
this is a great help I always tought my drawing skills were hopeless until I found this. thanks a lot.
btw it has a great interface.
and the personal touch in tekst makes it feel nicer.
geweldig, Absoluut Geweldig!
this is just the kind of song I love! and the type of song that makes my own creativty run faster.
I can turn this on while programming and it goes much smoother.
a really great song.
I'm happy you enjoyed it!
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