Xelaron's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic Ringed]

not bad at all

the 3D model was great.
but the animation was not.
3D animation is tough I now and since Im not so good at it either (not yet I hope) I'll give you the advice my school gave me over and again.
let someone walk, jump and move for you and use that as an example it will help to make the animation look more natural.
btw witch program do you use?
good luck with your future work!

[School 1:The Fat Bastard]

bad animation and graphics

but that was suposed to be so, good excuse now I don't have to work on my crappy drawings and can submit all my school work here.
but aside from the graphics and animation:
bad voice acting all the people spoke with the same voice and didn't have any emotion.
and the meaning of this was to put a smile on my face.
there is a smile there alright but thats because my day is great.
after seeing this I would rather cry.
work longer and harder on your next flash.
maybe animate the characters in your movie?
good luck in the future.

[how e-mail works]

work

your animation wasn't smooth.
It was jumpingh all the time wich is anoying to look at and you should learn a litle action script so you can click to the next part of the text.
Im a fast reader and was waiting for the next part to pop up but a slow reader might not be able to read it in time.
but it informed pretty well.
so go practice some more and your next flash might be a lot better.
good luck with your future work.

[Phoenix Wrong - Airplane]

good

nice Phoenix Wrong movie.
and you used airplane. ^^
great movie that one.
anyway keep it up.

[Oedipussy]

well...

this has no value.
make a decend flash with more effort put into it next time.
and if you want to react with go make your own flash.
Im working on it.

[Do A Jumpstyle In The Air]

sorry but no

this flash is nothing.
just a badly drawn mario jumping over a badly drawn goomba.
you seem to know how flash work so I wish you luck with other animations.
just don't make stuff like this.
nobody is waiting for stuff like this.
sorry.

Sticky responds:

Twips! Twips! Twips! You wanna dance like Mandy but you ran all out of candy! You never want to call it quits!

[Dendyn Dynasties]

great

one of the best things I have seen on NG.
not much more to say.
good luck with you animations.

[Walk-Smash-Walk]

oO nice one

this one is a litle strange and that is, in that case at least, good.
nicely animated and nice character desing.
great music too.